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Another amazing work

David you have once again provided newgrounds with a unique and high quality flash. Oh and tell Jerry Jackson that Ebaum stole his mario parody.

I personally think the clocks are gay.

But people like you making shit like this, just gives them a better image. If you are going to make something saying the clocks suck, it has to not suck itself. That was your fatal error.

Nicely done

but when you say, mouse drawn, I get the impression that everything in the flash is made with solid colors, and the brush tool. I noticed alot of gradients and circles and filters, so I took off one point. Aside from that this was an amazing flash

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33 Game Reviews

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Katamari damacyyyyyy. A decent inspiration albeit unoriginal. The story and comics were entertaining. My main problem with it is the limited area of play. it needs to be dynamic and scrolling, with more objects to devour. Having a 1000x1000 area means eating everything then going around the edges to catch spawning objects.

A decent start, but you need some work.

There are plenty of problems with this game, some that can be addressed fairly easily. First off, use space bar for firing rather than ctrl, its more comfortable. Secondly, use either attachMovie(linkage,newname,level) or duplicateMovie(linkage,newname,level) to create new instances of the bullets, and use variable counters to ensure they have different names and are on different layers. That way you can shoot more than one bullet at a time. If you don't know what I'm talking about, search for basic tutorials on them or look at the flash help page. Third, come up with a better concept than side scrolling enemiess that your space ship shoots. I'm sure this was one of your first submissions and you followed a basic shooter tutorial (I started with the same one) but try and put more effort into your submissions. Lastly, don't give up, as each successive game becomes easier to make as you get more familiar with actionscript. Good luck and hopefully I've been helpful.

Not a bad game.

Your animations were fluid, your gameplay was solid, and your sounds were good too, but your game fell short on originality. While there were components that deviated from the norm, such as leader powers, the concept has been tirelessly done over and over again. You have talent and could make gold, but this isn't it. A good, solid game never the less.

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Abe @spesalfred

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